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After reading the 2 comments from my last elevator pitch I used some of their feedback in my second one. I think it was important to not say "um" as much as I did last time. This second time around I feel better about my topic which made it easier to describe in such a short period of time. The rest of the feedback said that my topic was good and should be implemented.
I incorporated the learnings from the course thus far and the feedback to try to improve my elevator pitch. I think if I continue to practice it would become very easy to do.
Ian, good job focusing on not saying "um" and other filler words often. They distract the listener and it's almost always better to just leave a pause. I agree with the sentiment that this assignment was easier this time around since we have already done it before and it was awfully similar. Overall, great job and keep up the good work.
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